Coins at Dawn

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Sunday, 08-Oct-2006 10:15:26

I really hope this formats right, because if it doesn't, I'll be pissed.

COINS AT DAWN

Dawn
It begins
A new horizon
Shrouded in mists and shadows
But it seems so clear
Cut and dry
Real.
And I fear
I’m not good enough
Never good enough for you
But that’s so stupid
‘course I am
dream
hope and pray
call it, heads or tails
it’s a 50/50 chance
so you flip the coin
and it lands
HEADS

Post 2 by DancingAfterDark (I just keep on posting!) on Sunday, 08-Oct-2006 21:40:34

I love this. It has a tense feeling to it, if that makes sense. And I've no idea if this is how it was meant to be formatted, but it works. Cheers to you.

Post 3 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Monday, 09-Oct-2006 5:44:50

it is, and I worked so hard on it lol. the lines go from sylables, 1 3 5 7 5 3 1 and so on.

Post 4 by Grace (I've now got the ggold prolific poster award! wahoo! well done to me!) on Monday, 09-Oct-2006 9:19:54

HEADS!

Post 5 by Texas Shawn (The cute, cuddley, little furr ball) on Monday, 09-Oct-2006 9:48:12

pretty neet!

Post 6 by DancingAfterDark (I just keep on posting!) on Monday, 09-Oct-2006 17:08:04

Wow. Now I am massively impressed. I've never been able to write anything worth reading when it's that structured. Awesome.

Post 7 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Tuesday, 10-Oct-2006 5:44:19

now, stop posting to this and go read the other two! lol. thanks yall